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A beautiful girl cries in the night
She's sick and tired of hearing her parents fight
They hit her and tell her it's all her fault
She wipes away her tears and tastes the familiar salt
She packs her things and sends a text
The text says "help me, I can't take it" so the boy knows whats next
He takes her to his house, where she sits and cries
He hugs her tight and she says "I wish I could die"
She starts to shake, so he holds her tight
He kisses her forehead and tells her it'll be alright
She tells him what happened, and he wipes away her tears
He soothes her and tells her there's nothing to fear
"We'll find a place where you're safe and sound
We'll move somewhere nice, away from this town"
The girl smiles and falls asleep
Safe in his arms, she no longer weeps
He whispers to her "I love you so much"
She snuggles up to him and their feet gently touch
The boy can finally sleep peacefully
Knowing his girl is safe and can live worry-free.
this IS NOT ABOUT ME!

Just something I thought of in Math class. PLEASE pay attention to the 'he' and 'she' or else you'll be confused. Yeah, not my best, but hey, it's something, right?
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apachiart Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student General Artist
lovly
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Writer
I know I favorited this before, but I just have to say how much I love this.
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EmilyisInvisible Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
Awe, really? Thank you! ♥
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Writer
No problem dear! You deserve it.
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EmilyisInvisible Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Writer
thanks c:
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Oilux Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
No problem!
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j-ricaud Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great piece really like it :)
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EmilyisInvisible Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
thank you! c:
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aniqe Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing
it's sad but really good written
and the story it's awesome, with all that i wouldn't wish for anyone to go though that stuff...
really great work
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EmilyisInvisible Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Writer
thank you c: yeah, I couldn't imagine having to go through this. thanks again!
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